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The Halloween Family (Collab TF Story)The weather forecast had predicted a heavy downpour on the day of Halloween, but fortunately for three friends the rain stopped that morning so they could enjoy a night of trick or treating. Hannah, Cliff, and Aaron were only 7th graders, just part of the way through middle school. They got together three weeks before Halloween to decide how they would make it the most epic ever! The plan was simple. They would work together to make the costumes, work together to gather candy, and work together to eat it all. All of it would be done as a team. So they got to work immediately.Hannah wanted to go as a MIB agent and needed a suit, so Cliff lent her a black suit and tie with fine shoes and Aaron gave her a toy laser gun he used to have when he was in elementary school. They both chipped in to bring her a pair of nice black sunglasses. Aaron wanted to go as a panther, so Hannah gave him a big black hoodie and sewed two cat ears on the hood, while Cliff used a long black sock as a tail to s
TG Caption This: Turned Into A Kitsune DeityMy sister and I panted as we continued our hike in the woods. Trees overshadowed us in all directions, which was our only saving grace. It had to have been like 90 degrees here, so I could just imagine how hot it’d be if the trees were not actually here.“Why are we doing this?” asked my sister insistently. “Can we go home yet? I’m tired! I’m bored!”Did I mention my sister was only 5? I, of course, am much older, almost 18. I guess you could say that my sister was a little “mistake” that happened.“We’re almost there,” I said, trying to hide the fact that I was winded myself. We had to have hike for about 5 miles on this trail. Well, more I hiked 4 miles carrying my sister, she’s probably only walked one.“Carry me!” she yelled. I sighed and leaned down for her to grab onto my back.“Ow!” she yelled. I spun around, and there she was, her foot caught in a root. I pulled the root away a